Does this site make you want to buy?

I've just rewritten the copy for a website selling fresh, healthy, delicious gourmet meals, delivered to your door. www.metabolize.co.nz

These meals are particularly designed for health-conscious people who work hard ... and work out hard ... and when they come home tired they need a quick, healthy meal they can put in the microwave and eat quickly. they also want to know they are doing something good for their body rather than eating junk, like most instant meals are.

The original copy on the site was not inspiring many visitors to buy. It was getting plenty of visitors but few sales. The acid test of this new copy will be how the sales conversion rate improves during the next few weeks.

I will keep you posted on this blog. Check out the site at www.metabolize.co.nz.